I like the general idea. Without giving too much away, there is no little girl on the cover, but there is a sadistic sociopath. The equations belong to the one you mistook for a little girl, and the galaxy isn’t too far away, with the right technology. The book is a long way from being released, but you have to work on something when the muse strikes. I’ve had some parts of this done for as long as a year, but when I ran across the picture of the blond girl with pink flowers in her hair, it was perfect because Nekalee is a blond who puts pink flowers in her hair. I had to change her eye color because they’re supposed to be unearthly blue, but that’s the easy part.
It’s hard getting feedback, but any is welcome.
Addendum: A little revision. It’s easier to do this when I’m sleepy than to write.
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